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Chapter 1 - Ledrelyen

Fluffy white clouds floated in the blue afternoon sky.  Sparrows, robins, and jays chirped merrily in the lush green trees below.  Squirrels scampered across branches.  Through the lush green grassland just miles west of the forest, the Ama’lonn River rippled and flowed, a furrow of sapphire in the emerald countryside.  The pink amalin flowers that gave the river its name were in full bloom, strewn abundantly through the soft green grass.

The elven princess Ledrelyen sat atop a turret’s balcony of Castle Nathwenar, overlooking the land, her legs dangling over the parapet.  She was only six, but she could still appreciate the wonder of her father’s kingdom.  Someone would likely have been upset had they seen her perched in this precarious position.  Her mother probably would have screamed.  The thought had not really even crossed Ledrelyen’s childish mind.  Everyone in the castle was far too busy these days to pay much attention to her, so it had made for a delightful game to steal furtively away from all the hubbub.  Now she had escaped, and sat alone here in calm innocence, taking in the wonderful scene.  She was clad in a dress of emerald hue, the long sleeves decorated with thin traceries of pretty leaf patterns.  A gentle breeze blew past her pointed ears and ruffled her long golden hair, adorned with a headband of solid diamond from her father and a flower she had picked near the river.  It had been a few days since the young princess was allowed outside the castle, but the stalwart amalin flower still clung to its vibrant color, which was the most beautiful shade of pink at the base fading artfully up the petals to white edges.  Something was happening outside, something she understood only to the extent that it was keeping her inside the walls of Nathwenar.  She paid it little heed.  Ledrelyen loved life in her blissful innocence, for her father, King Vamendrae, ruled in a time of peace and prosperity.  Today this time would change.

From a high tower came the resonant sound of a silver horn, followed by the commanding voice of an elven captain.  “Black ones on the northwest horizon!  The Darians have come!  To arms!  ‘Tis the Black Legion!  To arms!”

Ledrelyen leapt to her feet, standing now upon the very edging of the balcony, her hands upon the raised stone beside her as she peered out toward the horizon.  Someone had told her several days ago which direction northwest was, but it took her a moment to rediscover it.  Eventually her eyes, young but gifted with the keen vision of elvenkind, settled on the black mass a few miles away on the grassy plain.  A deep-set fear emerged in her mind, but her eyes were riveted to the scene.  The wind blew against the folds of her dress as she stared out toward the approaching dark shape.  Before long she saw that it was in fact a cloud of many shapes, thousands, the shapes of men marching over the grass.  Black flags whipped in the wind above them, and their raiment was dark, darker than any she had ever seen.  Minutes passed—or perhaps hours, time was not chief among Ledrelyen’s concerns—as the black-clad men drew closer.

Lara’nai!” an elven captain yelled the order to fire.  Quick sounds then came to her ear, almost like swiftly uttered whispers, as barely visible blurs flew from the battlements below her out toward the approaching army.  Down upon the grass, men cried out and fell to the ground by the hundreds.  Arrows…but they were more than just arrows.  They were the legendary weapons of the elves.  These dark men had provoked their anger somehow, and even Ledrelyen knew that they would now pay dearly for their mistake.

As the front ranks fell away, the flanks of the Black Legion split away toward the sides of the castle.  One flank headed in her direction.  More elves lined up on the walls to meet their advance.  Then, near the rear of the black army came a great burst of flame, catching Ledrelyen’s eye as it seemed to gather in about itself and grow brighter.  Ledrelyen could hear the rumble and then a great whoosh as the ball of flame surged up into the air.  The cloud of arrows was lost to sight in the fire surging toward the ramparts some distance away to her left, and then it struck the wall.

The castle shook with the thundering boom.  Ledrelyen screamed as she was thrown from her feet back onto the balcony, bruising her arm.  She whimpered.  Somewhere below the balcony she could hear an elf yelling.  “Ladders!  They’re mounting the wall here!  To my side--ah!”  He was cut short as a bow twanged from amidst the Darians.  The clang of steel against steel met Ledrelyen’s ears.

She started to push herself up from the ground when suddenly the door leading back into the tower banged open.  A dark-haired man in ragged black clothing stood with his longsword in his gloved hand. 

“Well, what have we here?” he said menacingly, stepping toward her.

Then from the doorway a feathered shaft imbedded itself in his back.  Ledrelyen turned and gasped in relief when she saw an elven warrior standing at the door, longbow in hand.

“‘Twill be the last time you challenge us, filthy Darian,” he said to the collapsing man in black.  “Come, princess.”

The elf took Ledrelyen’s hand and rushed her away.  Back through the door, down a flight of stairs and across the ramparts they went.  Ledrelyen ran alongside him as fast as she could, panting and crying the whole way.  She could hear swords clashing and the twang of archers loosing arrows…and here and there she saw that dreadful fire, its smoke rising to the blue sky.  Where was Daddy?  Where was Mommy?  What was happening?

Finally the elf stopped.  They stood at the edge of the battlements.  The deep blue moat lay below.  Another warrior elf ran out a tower door, sword drawn.

“The black ones are coming up, Aa’ren!” he said.  “We must flee from this place!”

With a nod from the first elf, the two grabbed Ledrelyen and jumped off the ramparts.  The gray wall slid away behind them as they plummeted into the moat with a huge splash.  Ledrelyen panicked as her vision was consumed in swirling bubbles and waves.  She clung to the elves with all her little might, but the moat tugged them from her grasp.  She floundered underwater, frantically striving for the surface.  Then someone hauled her up out of the moat into a small crammed longboat.  Ledrelyen sat there for a minute in the stern of the boat, coughing up water and sobbing for breath.  She could see that her boat was not alone.  There were a few floating in the moat, all crammed with elves and a few husky dwarves.  They shouted hurriedly amongst each other, pulling out oars and fitting arrows to bows.  The boats began to sluggishly crawl out of the moat toward where it joined with the Ama’lonn River.  A volley of arrows flew up into the air and came down onto the small fleet.  Ledrelyen gasped as the second elf that had saved her fell, an arrow lodged in his chest.  Elves shot back at the Darian bowman, now collecting on the castle walls. Dwarves frantically rowed, stretching their powerful muscles to the very limit.  Accelerating, the boats cut through the water, barely evading volleys of arrows that nipped menacingly into the water just behind.  In minutes they were out of range.

The cries and sounds of battle soon died down.  Elves now crowded around Ledrelyen, concerned but unsure how to help.  A dwarf pushed his way through, motioning for the elves to move back.

“All right, lads, give the poor little maid some air,” he knelt beside the sobbing child, gently patting her back.  “There, there, me lassie.  Those blaggards in the black won’t be botherin’ us now, the pesky Darians.  M’name’s Baltofus, but my little friends can call me Baltie.”  Baltofus laid Ledrelyen down in his lap.  To the girl the world seemed to calm again as the water rushed by along the sides of the boat and the dwarf stroked her hair tenderly, whispering to the elf warrior who saved her, “Look at that!  She still has ‘er daddy’s diamond headband, and after all that!  I tell yer laddie, God’s pertectin’ our little princess.  She’s somethin’ special.”

As Ledrelyen drifted off to sleep in the dwarf's lap, she thought about the day’s drastic happenings.  She didn’t know these Darians, but someday, someday, she thought, she would put an end to them.