Mrs. Adam's 2nd grade class are learning to write descriptive paragraphs with 5 sentences- a topic sentence, 3 detail sentences and a concluding sentence. We think these students did a very, very good job!
 
 
 
 

  ICE CREAM

By Angel G.
Room 14

STRAWBERRIES

By Valentin R.

Room 14

I really, really like strawberries. I like strawberries because they are sweet. Inside the strawberries it tastes very good. Strawberries are juicy when you cut them. Strawberries are what I dream of.

DELICIOUS PIZZA

By Alyssa R.

I could eat pizza every day. I love the taste of pizza. I think that pizza is delicious with pepperoni. I like it with thin crust. I love the crust. I think they taste good all mixed together. I really, really, really, really, really love pizza
 

Nothing At All

By Jaylin Kerkviet

They say you're nothing special

They say you're not cute enough

But to me you are

One problem,

Do you even care about what

I feel for you

As I ask I can tell the answer

Is unclear

His expression

Blank as if you're in a daze

Are you listening

Please hear me out

Just answer me

Hello

" What is that you just said"

Now he listens

Nothing at all

I storm away

Destroyed, Heart Broken,

How can trust be so abused?

Betrayed and Hurt

"Help" I whimper to myself

Pain.

Death.

Do I carry on with my life

I don't want to

But I will

Memories pour in like a

Waterfall. The look on his face

Blank. But mine so easy to read. So Hurt

They ask if I'm o.k.

Does it look like it

I want to tell them all, but as

I'm about to. I see him skating to me

He asks what I said, should I tell

No

He had his chance to listen

Pain comes back

I feel as if death is calling my name

I fall

Bewildered, Helpless

On the ground head throbbing

I start to cry I try to get up

I scream at the pain

Has someone jabbed a knife in my back

My Imagination

Pain of hart break

Strong Powerful.

Captivating smile, charm, and personality

All gone now.

Finished.